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Girl, Falling, PB Hughes

Gatehouse Press, 2019   £6.00

Watery Musings

Hughes’ choice of Neruda’s lines as part of the epigraph seem to me to set the tone for this debut pamphlet:

and I wrote the first faint line,
faint, without substance, pure,
pure wisdom
of someone who knows nothing

The poems explore the point of view of someone suffering from self-doubt, through the realm of water and the experience of inhabiting it. Lack of punctuation throughout creates the necessary fluidity, e.g. an open sea, a far-off horizon, the tumult of waves and rainfall.

In ‘Falling’, set in a bathing pond, the narrator ‘came to be weightless / for the first time / clear in her mind’. She realises that life has possibilities beyond self-hate, enabling her to ‘slip the pool’s purchase’. Images of water reinforce the mood:

the surface of the pond shredded 
by rain the sepia water a second skin

In ‘Knee Deep in the North Sea’ the poet hesitantly seeks answers to uncertainty, assumptions, beliefs, to the ‘messy business’ of life in a series of abrupt stanzas. These suggest a confusion, an anxiety, a frustration about self in relation to the wider world.

Water-based images flood the lines: a horizon, bait, ‘the sea as a sock or a promise’, fish, sand, beach… ending on the unfinished line:

Take out the metaphors and

The poem ‘Rain’, one of my favourites in the pamphlet, vibrates with the power of a storm. It is laden with watery film shots and a strong sense of movement. We see the ‘luminous green lightning’ and feel ‘our shoulders shedding the weight / of waterlogged coats’.

There is hope, a raw sense of being in love with being alive in the moment:

all I could smell was rain
rain in your hair
on your skin

Maggie Mackay